Final) People should not use cell phones

-------In my opinion, people should not use cell phones while they are driving. First of all, it can cause fatal traffic accidents. Moreover, if they are new drivers, they absolutely should not drive while using cell phones. Another reason is that if policeman catch them driving and using their cell phones, they will be punished for violating the traffic regulations. They say that talking on a cell phone quadruples the risk of an accident and statistically, it’s as dangerous as driving while intoxicated. Let’s keep the rule of the traffic for us.

Final) Ways to Learn English

-------I believe that there are several ways to learn English. First of all, you should write a dairy in English. Also, you should watch TV dramas and movies in English. Finally, you should read newspapers and magazines every day. That ways will help you speak better in English.

Draft) Governments should make the environment their top priority

-------Governments should make the environment their top priority. First of all, the governments are obligated to protect the public health by preserving natural environment. Next, If the governments shouldn’t make the environment their top priority, natural resources will exhaust and some animals may disappear from the earth. Finally, governments have to leave a good environment to the future generations. Governments make a detailed plan for environment policy.

Final) Bilgraphy

-------I draw a fine picture of successful life. First, In order for me to succeed in society, I try to do benchmarking about people who succeed in their life. While I’m working in the company, I have learned about good bosses’ merits. As s result of analysis, most of them are diligent and have many plans to achieve. Naturally I’m lazy but try to be diligent. After making a short term and a long term plan, I’ve been practicing for plan as they did. Secondly, for successful marriage I looked for my spouse with the same values of life. Even though character of married couple doesn’t need the same character, I think it is very important to be equal to values of life. Fortunately we are equal about 70 % of them. Equal to 100% is not possible because of growing in different environment. So they make an effort to ingratiate each other. I think success of home life connect with social success. I always study and practice how to support family and what they need. Finally, I pursue to contribute in society and country. For basically family, relatives and friends moreover the poor, I would like to be rich to help them. In proverb, Tigers leave only their skins when they die, but through his achievements a man’s name lives on. I leave my name on posterity.

Final) A traffic Jam

-------We visit our family graves every year at Chuseok which is Korean Thanksgiving on the 15th August by the lunar calendar. This year, our family made a plan to travel abroad. During the holidays, we intended to stay at the World Resort Hotel in Saipan, which has various kinds of swimming pools with tubes for children and many places to rest. We were in the car going to the airport and we got stuck in a traffic jam. We worried about being late for the flight. We prayed that the traffic would start moving but it didn’t and we missed out flight. If we could have gotten there, Chuseok would have been the best holiday of my life.

Final) National Treasure collapsed in fire

-------Korea’s number 1 national treasure and landmark Sungnyemun, more commonly known as Namdaemun, was swallowed by fire on February 10. Namdaemun was a wooden structure from the Chosun Dynasty. First of all, the destruction of cultural heritage was the result of poor facility maintenance. If we prepare something special to prevent wood buildings from catching fire, it would not have happened. So, because of these poor measures, the national treasure was completely demolished five hours after it caught fire. Next, the government hadn’t ought to open it to the public. In actuality, we need to take measures in order to preserve our cultural heritage.

Final) My Trip to Singapore

-------I went to the Singapore three times. First of all, I went to Orchard Road which is Singapore’s main shopping street. The shops there ranged from chic boutiques to massive shopping malls like Tangs department store and Paragon which specializes in designer outlets. After having lunch, I went to Bugis Street. It was the place for bargains. It was a covered bazaar to offer clothes, handicrafts all at bargain prices. Many of the outlets stayed open until midnight. Then, I went to Chinatown to buy something to eat. I went to the Complex Temporary Market on Outram Road where vegetables and fruit are sold. I would like to recommend you to go shopping there.

Draft) Should not use cell phones

-------In my opinion, people should not use cell phones while they are driving. First of all, to drive using cell phone causes a fatal traffic accident. Moreover, If they are new driver, they absolutely should not drive using cell phone. Another reason, If the policeman find them to drive using cell phone, they will be punished for violation of the traffic regulations. They say that talking on a cell phone quadruples the risk of an accident and statistically, it’s as dangerous as driving while intoxicated. Let’s keep the rule of the traffic for us.

Draft] Biograpy

-------In 1968 I was born in Gyeonggi Province. But I spent most of childhood days in Seoul. In 1986 I entered the university and majored in accounting. After I graduated from it, I started working for Asiana Airlines. I've been working for 19 years in the finance division. I started my career in General Accounting and I have worked for Revenue accounting for the last nine years. I met my husband in December 1992 and married in November 1993. I had a son in 1994 and a daughter in 1998. In 2003, I had a chance to study for 4 months without working in the graduate school of business at Sogang University known as the "Kumho MBA" program. This Thursday is 19th anniversary I was hired 19 years ago. Nowadays I promise myself to be back to the basics and start work with a renewed mind.

Draft) A Traffic Jam

-------Every year we visited our family graves at chuseok (Korean Thanksgiving) on the 15th August by the lunar calendar. But, for this year’s “Chuseok” holidays, our family was going to travel abroad. During all holidays, we were planning to stay a “world resort hotel “in Saipan. The world resort had various kinds of swimming pool with tubes for children and many places to rest for adult. At that time, we were in a car to the airport and worried about late arrival for boarding aircraft for Saipan. We prayed to free up the traffic jam. If we could go there, this chuseok would be the best holidays for my life.

Draft) National Treasure collapsed in fire

-------Korea’s number 1 national treasure and landmark Sungnyemun, more commonly known as Namdaemun, was swallowed by fire on February 10. Namdaemun was the wooden structure from the Chosun Dynasty. First of all, the destruction of cultural heritage was the result of poor facility maintenance. I f we had a special preparation for the the fire of wooden building, it would not happen. Then, because of slow measures, the national treasure completely demolished five hours after it caught fire. Next, The government didn’t have to open for coming and going of Namdaemun. In actuality, we need to take measures in order to preserve our cultural heritage.

Draft) My trip to singapore

-------I went to the Singapore three times. First of all, I went to the Orchard Road which was Singapore’s main shopping street. The shops there ranged from chic boutiques to massive shopping malls like Tangs department store and Paragon which specializes in designer outlets. After having lunch, I went to the Bugis Street. It was the place for bargains with a covered bazaar offering clothes, handicrafts all at bargain prices. Many of outlets here stayed open until midnight. Then, I went to the Chinatown to buy something to eat at night. It has the Complex Temporary Market on Outram Road where vegetables and fruits can be founded. I would like to recommend you to go shopping there

Final) My Hometown

-------My hometown, Kanwon province, is a famous tourist spot in Korea. Kanwon province has Mt. seorak and famous beaches with many raw fish restaurants. It is hot in the summer and cold in the winter. It is a big merit of Kanwon Province that tourist can sightsee both mountains and beaches. I love city.

Final) An untidy room

-------My room is big. There are several big windows so my room is always sunny. There are two kinds of windows, one is made of glass the other is made of paper. There is a bed that faces towards the windows. Beside the bed, there is a desk for a laptop computer and a laser printer. Above the bed, there is a big family photograph. On the other side of the bed, there is a closet and a hanger. There is also a bathroom which has a table for putting on makeup. Even though my room is not well-ordered, it is comfortable for me.