Final) People should not use cell phones

-------In my opinion, people should not use cell phones while they are driving. First of all, it can cause fatal traffic accidents. Moreover, if they are new drivers, they absolutely should not drive while using cell phones. Another reason is that if policeman catch them driving and using their cell phones, they will be punished for violating the traffic regulations. They say that talking on a cell phone quadruples the risk of an accident and statistically, it’s as dangerous as driving while intoxicated. Let’s keep the rule of the traffic for us.

Final) Ways to Learn English

-------I believe that there are several ways to learn English. First of all, you should write a dairy in English. Also, you should watch TV dramas and movies in English. Finally, you should read newspapers and magazines every day. That ways will help you speak better in English.

Draft) Governments should make the environment their top priority

-------Governments should make the environment their top priority. First of all, the governments are obligated to protect the public health by preserving natural environment. Next, If the governments shouldn’t make the environment their top priority, natural resources will exhaust and some animals may disappear from the earth. Finally, governments have to leave a good environment to the future generations. Governments make a detailed plan for environment policy.

Final) Bilgraphy

-------I draw a fine picture of successful life. First, In order for me to succeed in society, I try to do benchmarking about people who succeed in their life. While I’m working in the company, I have learned about good bosses’ merits. As s result of analysis, most of them are diligent and have many plans to achieve. Naturally I’m lazy but try to be diligent. After making a short term and a long term plan, I’ve been practicing for plan as they did. Secondly, for successful marriage I looked for my spouse with the same values of life. Even though character of married couple doesn’t need the same character, I think it is very important to be equal to values of life. Fortunately we are equal about 70 % of them. Equal to 100% is not possible because of growing in different environment. So they make an effort to ingratiate each other. I think success of home life connect with social success. I always study and practice how to support family and what they need. Finally, I pursue to contribute in society and country. For basically family, relatives and friends moreover the poor, I would like to be rich to help them. In proverb, Tigers leave only their skins when they die, but through his achievements a man’s name lives on. I leave my name on posterity.

Final) A traffic Jam

-------We visit our family graves every year at Chuseok which is Korean Thanksgiving on the 15th August by the lunar calendar. This year, our family made a plan to travel abroad. During the holidays, we intended to stay at the World Resort Hotel in Saipan, which has various kinds of swimming pools with tubes for children and many places to rest. We were in the car going to the airport and we got stuck in a traffic jam. We worried about being late for the flight. We prayed that the traffic would start moving but it didn’t and we missed out flight. If we could have gotten there, Chuseok would have been the best holiday of my life.

Final) National Treasure collapsed in fire

-------Korea’s number 1 national treasure and landmark Sungnyemun, more commonly known as Namdaemun, was swallowed by fire on February 10. Namdaemun was a wooden structure from the Chosun Dynasty. First of all, the destruction of cultural heritage was the result of poor facility maintenance. If we prepare something special to prevent wood buildings from catching fire, it would not have happened. So, because of these poor measures, the national treasure was completely demolished five hours after it caught fire. Next, the government hadn’t ought to open it to the public. In actuality, we need to take measures in order to preserve our cultural heritage.

Final) My Trip to Singapore

-------I went to the Singapore three times. First of all, I went to Orchard Road which is Singapore’s main shopping street. The shops there ranged from chic boutiques to massive shopping malls like Tangs department store and Paragon which specializes in designer outlets. After having lunch, I went to Bugis Street. It was the place for bargains. It was a covered bazaar to offer clothes, handicrafts all at bargain prices. Many of the outlets stayed open until midnight. Then, I went to Chinatown to buy something to eat. I went to the Complex Temporary Market on Outram Road where vegetables and fruit are sold. I would like to recommend you to go shopping there.

Draft) Should not use cell phones

-------In my opinion, people should not use cell phones while they are driving. First of all, to drive using cell phone causes a fatal traffic accident. Moreover, If they are new driver, they absolutely should not drive using cell phone. Another reason, If the policeman find them to drive using cell phone, they will be punished for violation of the traffic regulations. They say that talking on a cell phone quadruples the risk of an accident and statistically, it’s as dangerous as driving while intoxicated. Let’s keep the rule of the traffic for us.

Draft] Biograpy

-------In 1968 I was born in Gyeonggi Province. But I spent most of childhood days in Seoul. In 1986 I entered the university and majored in accounting. After I graduated from it, I started working for Asiana Airlines. I've been working for 19 years in the finance division. I started my career in General Accounting and I have worked for Revenue accounting for the last nine years. I met my husband in December 1992 and married in November 1993. I had a son in 1994 and a daughter in 1998. In 2003, I had a chance to study for 4 months without working in the graduate school of business at Sogang University known as the "Kumho MBA" program. This Thursday is 19th anniversary I was hired 19 years ago. Nowadays I promise myself to be back to the basics and start work with a renewed mind.

Draft) A Traffic Jam

-------Every year we visited our family graves at chuseok (Korean Thanksgiving) on the 15th August by the lunar calendar. But, for this year’s “Chuseok” holidays, our family was going to travel abroad. During all holidays, we were planning to stay a “world resort hotel “in Saipan. The world resort had various kinds of swimming pool with tubes for children and many places to rest for adult. At that time, we were in a car to the airport and worried about late arrival for boarding aircraft for Saipan. We prayed to free up the traffic jam. If we could go there, this chuseok would be the best holidays for my life.

Draft) National Treasure collapsed in fire

-------Korea’s number 1 national treasure and landmark Sungnyemun, more commonly known as Namdaemun, was swallowed by fire on February 10. Namdaemun was the wooden structure from the Chosun Dynasty. First of all, the destruction of cultural heritage was the result of poor facility maintenance. I f we had a special preparation for the the fire of wooden building, it would not happen. Then, because of slow measures, the national treasure completely demolished five hours after it caught fire. Next, The government didn’t have to open for coming and going of Namdaemun. In actuality, we need to take measures in order to preserve our cultural heritage.

Draft) My trip to singapore

-------I went to the Singapore three times. First of all, I went to the Orchard Road which was Singapore’s main shopping street. The shops there ranged from chic boutiques to massive shopping malls like Tangs department store and Paragon which specializes in designer outlets. After having lunch, I went to the Bugis Street. It was the place for bargains with a covered bazaar offering clothes, handicrafts all at bargain prices. Many of outlets here stayed open until midnight. Then, I went to the Chinatown to buy something to eat at night. It has the Complex Temporary Market on Outram Road where vegetables and fruits can be founded. I would like to recommend you to go shopping there

Final) My Hometown

-------My hometown, Kanwon province, is a famous tourist spot in Korea. Kanwon province has Mt. seorak and famous beaches with many raw fish restaurants. It is hot in the summer and cold in the winter. It is a big merit of Kanwon Province that tourist can sightsee both mountains and beaches. I love city.

Final) An untidy room

-------My room is big. There are several big windows so my room is always sunny. There are two kinds of windows, one is made of glass the other is made of paper. There is a bed that faces towards the windows. Beside the bed, there is a desk for a laptop computer and a laser printer. Above the bed, there is a big family photograph. On the other side of the bed, there is a closet and a hanger. There is also a bathroom which has a table for putting on makeup. Even though my room is not well-ordered, it is comfortable for me.

Draft] How to cook " Boiled Ribs"

-------Here is an easy recipe to cook for “Boiled ribs”. First, go to a meat shop to buy ribs of bull. Then, put ribs in the pot for four hours to remove the blood. After that, cut the radish and carrot with square in figure. Next, mix the seasoning such as a green onion, onion, garlic, ginger, soy sauce, alcohol for food, starch syrup, pepper, pear, water in the small pot. Then, boiled them for 20 minutes and make them cold with strainer. Then, boil ribs, big garlic, ginseng and mixing seasoning in a pressure cooker for 20 minutes. Finally, put radish, carrot, chestnut, jujube and then boiled with opened lid.

Final) How to pack for a weekend trip

------- Here is an easy way to pack for a weekend trip. First, go to a big market. Then, buy a lot of things such as materials for kimbob, drinks, cookies, fruit and vegetables. After that, put the drinks in the refrigerator to keep them cold. Next, put the cookies for the children in a backpack. Then, wash the vegetables to make a salad. In the early morning, make kimbob and the salad. Put them in a backpack along with the drinks.

Final) More about me

-------I am a very organized and ambitious person. I always do my best to make my life better. First of all, I like to make a short-term and a long-term plan. Then I make a detailed monthly and yearly plan. Next, I make an effort to achieve my goals. One plan is to speak English fluently and get a high TOEIC score. Finally, I work hard to become a rich to make the world a better place.

Final) My Mother

-------My mother is a very generous woman. She has sacrificed everything for our family. She also takes care of my children so that I can continue to work thanks to her. She always does favors for other people.

Draft] An untidy room

-------My room is untidy. There are several big windows so my room is always sunny. Windows are in two lines, one is glasses the other is window paper. My bed is toward windows. Beside the bed, there are a desk for laptop computer and a laser printer. Above the bed, there is a big family photograph . On the other side of the bed, there are a closet and a hanger. In my room, there is a bathroom which has a table for putting on makeup. Even though my room is untidy, it is comfortable for me

Final) My typical weekday

-------I wake up at 6:00 a.m every morning. First of all, I take a shower. Then I always put on make up. After that, I go to work by car. Next, I usually eat lunch in the company’s restaurant. After that, I take care of my children. Finally, I usually go to bed at 12:00.

Draft] More about me

-------I am a very organized and ambitious person. I always do my best to make my life better. First of all, I like to make a short-term and a long-term plan. Then I make a detailed plan for years, even monthly. Next, I try to practice to achieve a goal. One of the detailed plans is speaking English fluently and gets a high score for TOEIC. Finally, I want to become a rich woman to make the world a better place.

Draft] My mother

-------My mother is a very generous woman. She has sacrificed herself for our family so far. And she also takes care of my children so that I can continue to work thanks to her. She always gives favors toward people.

Final) My friend

-------My friend’s name is Jin Hee Kim. She is 41 years old. She got married in Seoul in 1993 and now she lives in Los Angeles. She is a housewife. She likes to cook and take care of her children. I met her for the first time when I was a freshman in middle school. She became my close friend and remained so. She is warm, a good listener and fun to be with. Nowadays she wants to come back to Korea because her mother was diagnosed with lung cancer. Her mother is 76 years old. She's an amazing person and I'm lucky to have her as a friend.

Final) Ways to stay Healthy

-------I do several things to try to stay healthy. First of all, I believe that “a sound mind is a sound body”. I try to exercise regularly to maintain the same weight and sometimes go for a walk around the village. I also try to drink water, including tea, to keep my skin moist. Finally, I always try to think positively and make attainable goals. I think that an important way to stay healthy is a balance between good mind and good health.

(Final) My classmate

-------My classmate's name is Eun Hee Choi. She usually puts on makeup even though she is beautiful. She is an in-flight service designer. She works in Asiana Town. She goes to work by car. She works from 8:00 a.m to 8:00 p.m. After that, she takes care of her daughter. As you can see on her blog, the relationship with her daughter is very good. Vist her blog and you'll see she's a wonderful person.

Draft] Ways to stay healthy

-------I do several things to try to stay healthy. I believe a slogan “a sound mind in a sound body”
-------I try to take regular exercise to stay the same weight and sometimes go for a walk around a village. I also try to drink much water including tea to keep the skin moist. Finally I always try to think positive and continue to make a goal which can be attainable.
-------I think that it is important that way to stay healthy is balance between good mind and good body.

(Final) Free Time

-------When I have free time, I like to go to the movies near house. On Saturday I get up early in the morning and then go for a walk around the Lake Park in Ilsan. I also like to go window shopping after lunch.
-------Another thing I enjoy is to take a drink to get rid of stress on weekends. I like to travel, and I like to read a book rated to education. I enjoy listening to music, but I don’t enjoy dancing. As you can see, all of these things can help me make a happy life.

(Final) My English Teacher

-------Kimberley is famous for her enthusiastic teaching style in Asiana. She fully understands Korean’s weak points in speaking and writing English. She majored in Education in university and has a TOSEL diploma and various other kinds of License related to teaching.
-------She met her husband through a friend 8 years ago in Korea. She married him 5 years ago. She likes to paint and cook. My colleagues say that she cooks very well.
-------She enjoys entertaining her friends in her home. She promised to invite me sometime. I will hold her to her promise.

(Draft) My Friend

-------My friend’s name is Jin Hee Kim. She is 41 years old. She got married in Seoul in 1993. Now she lives in Los Angeles. She is a housewife. She likes to cook and take care of her children.
-------When I was a freshman in the middle school, I met her for the first time. She became my close friend and remained so. She is warm, good listener and fun to be with.
-------Nowadays she wanted to come back to Korea because her mother was diagnosed as cancer of the lung. Her mother is 76 years old.

(Final) My Family

-------I have 5 people in my family. My parents’ names are Ju Il Kim and young Hee Kim. My father was a government official but passed away 4 years ago. My mother is a business woman. I have 3 sisters and a brother. Their names are Eun Young Kim, Eun Jin Kim, Min Su Kim. They are 40, 39 and 37 years old.
------- I have a husband and two children. They are son and daughter. Their names are Bo Sun Ryu and Yeon Ju Ryu. They are 14 and 11 years old. I love them so much.

(Final) Self Introduction

-------I was born in February 1968 in Yangpeong, Gyeonggi Province which is famous nowadays for Choi Jinsil's grave.After graduating university, I started working for Asiana Airlines. I've been working for 19 years in the finance division and I started my career in General Accounting. I have worked for Revenue accounting for the last nine years.
-------I have a chance to travel a lot with Asiana Airlines including business trips. It’s hard to list the cities and countries I’ve visited but I’ve traveled to such places as Japan, Singapore, Twain, Thailand, Vietnam, India, Indonesia, Hong Kong, China, America, Germany, France and Switzerland. I met my husband in December 1992 and married in November 1993. I couldn’t postpone his proposal anymore.I had a son in 1994 and a daughter in 1998. I call them "fat brother and thin sister". Their appearances are so different that it is difficult to regard them as family.
-------In 2003, I had a chance to study for 4 months without working in the graduate school of business at Sogang University known as the "Kumho MBA" program. It was not only a great chance to recharge my business related knowledge but also to refresh myself.More and more, I would like to write and communicate better with foreigners in English.I heard Kimberly would guide me to enhance my English writing. I’m ready to work hard and do all my homework assignments in this class.

(draft) My English Teacher

------Kimberley is famous for her enthusiastic teaching style in Asiana. She looks like that she fully understands the Korean’s weak point in speaking and writing English. She majored in Education in the University and has TOSEL diploma and various kinds of License related to teaching.
------She met his husband through friend 8 years ago in Korea. She married him 5 years ago. She likes to paint and cook. I heard that she cooks very well from my colleagues.
------She enjoys inviting her friends to entertain in her home. She promised me to invite me in her home sometime. I believe her promise. ^^

[draft] Self Introduction

-------I was born in February 1968, Yangpeong Gyeonggi Province where is famous for Choi Jinsil's grave nowadays.After graduating the University, I started to work for the Asiana Airlines. I've been working for 19 years in finance division. I started my career in General Accounting. I have worked for Revenue accounting for nine years.
-------I have a nice chance to travel a lot with Asiana Airlines including business trip. It’s hard to list the cities and countries, I traveled, such as Japan, Singapore, Twain, Thailand, Vietnam, Indo, Indonesia, Hong Kong, China, America, Germany, France, Swiss.
-------I met my husband in December 1992 and married in November 1993. I couldn’t postpone his propose anymore.^^I had a son in 1994 and a daughter in 1998. I call them "FAT BROTHER and thin sister". Their appearances are so different that it is difficult to regard them as family.
-------In 2003, I had a chance to study for 4 months without working in the graduate school of business at Sogang University. We call them "Kumho MBA". It was not only the great chance to recharge my business related knowledge but also to refresh myself.More and more, I would like to write and speak what I want to communicate with foreigners in English.I heard Kimberly would guide me to enhance my English writing. I’m ready to work hard to do homework assignments in this class.

Greeting

-------Hello everyone. My name is Eun Jung Kim and work in Reveune Accounting Team.