Thursday, November 27, 2008

Final) More about me

-------I am a very organized and ambitious person. I always do my best to make my life better. First of all, I like to make a short-term and a long-term plan. Then I make a detailed monthly and yearly plan. Next, I make an effort to achieve my goals. One plan is to speak English fluently and get a high TOEIC score. Finally, I work hard to become a rich to make the world a better place.

2 comments:

hayonghong said...

Did you finish preparations for business trip? Please don't forget passport. Good luck!!!
See you on thursday~~~

Kim said...

It sound like you're organized and you have big dreams. I think it's great that you want to make the world a better place. I hope you are successful!!

Here are some tips.

1. When you use "like" we often use the plural form. For example, you like to make short-term and long-term goals.

2. Make an effort means to just try. Do you mean that you try hard to achieve the goals?

3. "Rich" is an adjective so you don't need an article (a).